Sunday, 26 June 2016

Made to Order

"Had wanted my life partner
to be worldly wise
this guy appears to be 'too spiritual'
for my comfort...
weaning him away
is top priority..."

"Hey now, the problem seems to be reversed
he's become too worldly
spends too much money, has too many friends
showing interest in FTV and the like...
need to change this, got to act fast..."

"If only I had an invisible string
that could be manipulated
to adjust and readjust behaviour
precisely to my requirements
exactly as I want it..."


  1. Great writing with a very powerful message.

  2. Thank you Purba.Happy that you got the essence of the poem.

  3. Thank you for sharing your thought Shwetha.Many would want that.yet,manipulation does not give long term happiness either to the one who is manipulating or the one who is manipulated...

  4. Great post..yes everyone one wants the same ...nice message.

  5. Thank you for your feedback Arsha!