In a Facebook literary group, a friend Sundar Rajan posted this picture. He sought poems from members based on the picture. This is what I came up with ..
as little boys ran after little waves
and then ran back when they returned to the shore
A little distance away, bigger boys ventured farther
to challenge the bigger waves
they wanted to show off
let people know how courageous they are
no longer the little boys chasing small waves...
Then came this magnificent, giant wave
mesmerizing in its beauty
even I wanted to feel it
on my body and soul
and simply merge with it into eternity...
As the oblivious me walked towards it
wife jerked me out of the trance
"What are you doing
you don't even know swimming!"
somehow, at that moment nothing seemed to matter
except merging into that magnificent whale of a wave....
Beautifully versed.
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ReplyDeleteThe desire to merge into a wave makes you a potential mystic. Probably you're one.
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