Wednesday 22 April 2015

Missing

After a bitter fight
Hot words and hard words
She walked out

Days later they kissed and made up
And she was back
Both pretended that it was like old times

Yet there was something missing
Something lost
In the interlude…

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12 comments:

  1. Anonymous22 April 2015 at 09:30

    oh yea... tell me about it... :(
    well written Rajeev!

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  2. Ananya22 April 2015 at 12:16

    Beautifully Penned

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  3. Indrani22 April 2015 at 18:43

    yes the crack remains!
    Well expressed Rajeev.

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  4. Rajeev Moothedath22 April 2015 at 19:56

    Thank you Archana,Ananya and Indrani!

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  5. Sahithya Sridhar22 April 2015 at 23:37

    nice.. :)

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  6. Rajeev Moothedath23 April 2015 at 01:02

    Thank you Sahithya!

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  7. Mridula23 April 2015 at 08:15

    I hope the memories dim with time of the fights and bad times.

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  8. Rajeev Moothedath23 April 2015 at 23:31

    They say "Time-the great healer"- So one has to hope for the best, Mridula.Thank you for sharing your thoughts!

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  9. K.A. Acharya27 April 2015 at 05:36

    Some feelings are always lost in fights, but Time heals the scars. Beautifully penned.

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  10. Rajeev Moothedath27 April 2015 at 09:47

    Thank you for sharing your thoughts Kiran!

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  11. Saru Singhal29 April 2015 at 07:36

    Ah, things never go back to same.

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  12. Rajeev Moothedath29 April 2015 at 09:20

    Thank you Saru!

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